the concept of this is really fun !! i like the way that what exactly this goose-chase will entail isn't revealed immediately. i wasn't expecting that the goose would be the one chasing, or that it would be so life-threatening. (the first end i got was being killed by the goose.)
i think that more options during the chase would make it more engaging game-wise, and/or a timer (or perhaps a goose-distance tracker? like how far you are from the goose/death). narrative-wise, i think the concept itself makes it very engaging -- and it continues to be engaging throughout. the shorter passages/text and the minimal (visual) design makes it feel appropriate for a chase.
if you end up having time, i think even very basic illustrations (a few different silly-goose-illustrations) would add a lot to the game :)
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the concept of this is really fun !! i like the way that what exactly this goose-chase will entail isn't revealed immediately. i wasn't expecting that the goose would be the one chasing, or that it would be so life-threatening. (the first end i got was being killed by the goose.)
i think that more options during the chase would make it more engaging game-wise, and/or a timer (or perhaps a goose-distance tracker? like how far you are from the goose/death). narrative-wise, i think the concept itself makes it very engaging -- and it continues to be engaging throughout. the shorter passages/text and the minimal (visual) design makes it feel appropriate for a chase.
if you end up having time, i think even very basic illustrations (a few different silly-goose-illustrations) would add a lot to the game :)